well first a little about the song...ive been working on it for about a month now and im stuck on the title....its a 3 chord irish song in the vain of flogging molly/blood or whiskey/etc.....mid tempo waltz timing 3/4...a little rougher than traditional but not as punk as the dropkick murphys

as far as the lyrics go i could care less if you steal em...no one here is gonna be a rock star...
ther is no chorus...but there will be an alternate rhythm verse btwn 2 and 3


another 21 gun salute
in a garden made of stone
another widows tear stains the flag

and youll ask what can i do?
well i ll be dyin but not for you
i wont give my life to please a man



another marraige turns to shit
in a castle made of sand
another lawyer rich on broken plans

and youll ask what can i do
well i ll be livin but not with you
i dont need a wife to be a man



another sorrow drowns a man
in an ocean built on tears
a stoic man he was amongst his peers

and youll ask what can i do
well i ll be standin there with you
cause i know what its like to be a man
i said i know what its like so there i stand




im sort of looking for one word to sum up the 3 verses...the common thread is either manhood or the fact of the metaphors used in line 2 of each verse.. (the first one is a cemetary for our more dense members)...once i get the title i ll work on the last verse mentioned above

if i ever finish it and get to record it with the boys...i ll post it here
thanx

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Stone

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nice....i been thinking about stone and it works for 2 of 3 verses(cemetary and stoicism)...but it does contradict the broken marraige verse....but thats just me bein picky

i was hoping for a few more ideas to choose from but for now....stone is typed across the lyric page

thanx lobo

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looter n. : someone who takes spoils or plunder (as in war) [syn: plunderer, pillager, spoiler, despoiler, raider, freebooter]

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shit - fits in with the marriage bit and sums your song up.

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Laugh long, live long,
Yesterday is history
Tomorrow is a mystery
Today is a Gift
That is why they call it the present

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Avenue 1
takes it in the bum
and banned 3 times was he

a bit of a prick
who makes us all sick
and no one here disagrees


and i know it was more than 3 too

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looter n. : someone who takes spoils or plunder (as in war) [syn: plunderer, pillager, spoiler, despoiler, raider, freebooter]

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Thats not very nice zooted, i was jokin'about your song. It actually touched me...

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Originally posted by ZootedLooter
nice....i been thinking about stone and it works for 2 of 3 verses(cemetary and stoicism)...but it does contradict the broken marraige verse....but thats just me bein picky

i was hoping for a few more ideas to choose from but for now....stone is typed across the lyric page

thanx lobo

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Pluralise it and it could also reference the diamond in a wedding ring

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right about now i think i will add a d on the end

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What a fuckin' surprise.

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Does it have a bit in it that goes 'doo-wop-a-diddly-a-ding-dong-ding-ding'?


That's also a great title I just pseudo-suggested for you.

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