cobalt
Jun 2003
 Senior Member
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Looking good, although I would mention one or two things, if you don't mind?
The font, for the title especially, seems a little thin in places, it doesn't really stand out that much, and not that readable if your just scanning it by eye for a half a second.
The selection around some the parts seems a bit hap-hazard and 'jaggidy' in some places, around the cop's hat, and the bottom-left guitarist t-shirt. Not sure if this was cause its a WIP, but maybe a bit more feather or blending between the different images might smooth it over a bit.
The neater selection will probably help with the baby on the wall as well, taking out much of the white behind the child. Also, I suppose remeber to distort the baby image to fit the perspective of the wall
Are the band completly against having any colour in the image? It would not take much, but just like your original source, matching sutble tones just brings it to life a little bit.
As I say, apart from that, looking good.
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